The 3 R's
Rhythm, Rhyme, and Repetition
Susan says -
Poetry is meant to be spoken aloud, as are bedtime stories. What a happy coincidence then, that my "Please Wilson..." series is both!
I like to use the 3 R's extensively in my writing. The ballad stanza form gives the words rhythm, the rhyme scheme anticipates the next word, and the repetition of certain phrases provides a lyrical refrain to the story.
Together, these 3 elements can help a child start to recognize the patterns and sounds of letters and words which in turn help them on their exciting journey towards independent reading. A whole new world awaits!
Here's an earlier poem I wrote that illustrates the 3 R's in action.
Sail Away
I wish that I could sail away
Out to the open sea
I’d cast away at break of day
In order to be free.
No one to tell me what to do
Or when to go to bed
To sit up straight, or clean my plate
I’d be the boss, instead!
I’ll be the Captain of my ship
And sail it where I may
Oh, I’ll be found adventure bound
To where, I cannot say.
For company, I’ll have the sea
And all that it contains
I’ll be alone, out on my own
But never once complain.
The whales will gambol in my wake
The seagulls fly on high
The dolphins splash as they race past
Sea turtles will I spy.
The mermaid song will lead me on
To Fate, my soul commend
I’ll brave the storm and round the Horn
Return, I know not when.
I’ll set a course for far off ports
Like Zanzibar and Greece
I’ll see Peru and Timbuktu
Siam and Mozambique.
I’ll sail these waters, though unknown
In this I’ll not relent
And in the hold, I’ll bring back gold
From places that I went.
The thrill of life before the mast
Exotic ports of call
From howling gales to humpback whales
I want to see it all.
Believe-you-me, I’ll sail to sea
Into the rising sun
I’ll jump a ship and take a trip
Before this day is done.
I’ll taste the salt spray on my lips
And feel the breezes blow
The open sea is where I’ll be
No telling where I’ll go.
I’ll have adventures, tales untold
So come and take a look
I’m going to sail the Seven Seas
By reading a good book!
© 2023 Susan Brindley
For these and other tales of the high seas, please visit the children's classic section of your local library or favourite bookstore.
Peter Pan
Treasure Island
Swiss Family Robinson
20,000 Leagues Under the Sea